Yeah, she didn't really think this all the way through, did she haha I enjoyed this one, although i would've prefered a bit more reluctance from the father (at least at the "getting pregnant by his own son" part) and the mother acting somewhat more negative to the final outcome. You know, bit more drama or whatnot. Little more believeable reactions. Don't take it the wrong way though, well done overall!
Sounds like her little plan sort of backfired on her.
ReplyDeleteWhy didn't she cast the spell on herself ?
ReplyDeleteYeah, she didn't really think this all the way through, did she haha
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this one, although i would've prefered a bit more reluctance from the father (at least at the "getting pregnant by his own son" part) and the mother acting somewhat more negative to the final outcome. You know, bit more drama or whatnot. Little more believeable reactions.
Don't take it the wrong way though, well done overall!