Wednesday, May 13, 2020

It was obvious from the begining


6 comments:

  1. Great story Marti!!! Wish you would follow up with how this mysterious transformation happen and what does she do next...fall in love with Mike??
    Wake up each morning wishing this would happen to me. Zoe

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    1. Well, the transformation is going to remain mysterious ;) As for what happens later it's all up to what you would like to happen :)

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  2. Could you okay around with intelligence decrease a little more?

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  3. Really wonderful story with a hint of what might be coming in their future. I hope that as Zoe said there will be a follow on to explain what happened and what the future holds for them.

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  4. I'd like to leave the follow up to your creative mind and surprise us with something exciting! Zoe

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