That's really good. Definitely do more! I like the way the second-last paragraph ends. There is something cool about you telling the story in the 2nd person even though I don't really picture myself in the story at all. Not sure what it is I like about it.
That's really good. Definitely do more! I like the way the second-last paragraph ends. There is something cool about you telling the story in the 2nd person even though I don't really picture myself in the story at all. Not sure what it is I like about it.
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