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Tuesday, January 29, 2019

Should have stayed at the bar


2 comments:

  1. Just the thought of experiencing pregnancy is a wonderful dream of mine.

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  2. Oops I gave you an OK because I think you thought idea jumped the rails between paragraph 5 & 6 I think there is missing seeing the story is dealing with 3 people. who did the second person learn body hopping. Or did I just read this wrong?

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